Comments on my friend’s essay , writing homework help

Hi , how are you doing

I need someone to write comments about my friend’s essay

The comment will be about

If he does the following condition that will be alright , and say he has a goo intro but in Academic way . If he has unclear thesis , you will write an advice for him about the thesis , intro con , etc ? Have gotten the idea ?

Finally, it is comments to improve his writing if he mess something, but if he does it very well , you have to write he has MLA format very well etc and I will attache the essay.

Notice: write the comments as an Essay.

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