Common App Essay, can anyone look over my essay due tonight?

Hi, I have completed my Common App essay but would love someone to look over it.

I’m looking for suggestions, constructive cristism or ways I can improve my writing.

If we could get in contact soon, I would very much apperciate your cooperation, Thank you

Here’s a link to the essay: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lWFudXkgPoOPA_ZwDni3Ud_Hc9kYqxX1DbXaORiw5rY/edit?usp=sharing

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