I need this Toulmin essay to be corrected, it’s a disaster.
This essay with annotated bibliography should be between 900 and 1000 words, excluding the required annotated bibliography. It must be in MLA format.
This essay must include a minimum of
Three should be
peer-reviewed sources, preferably from the APUS databases. (login: Id: 4677787, password: Killemall15 From
the library welcome page, click on Advanced Search at the bottom of the
page and then check the “peer reviewed” sources box filter.
My thesis statement for this Toulmin essay is Although corporal punishment is legal in nineteen states to enforce disciplinary action against students, corporal punishment should never be used because it can lead to adverse behaviors and experiences.
If you think my thesis needs improvement feel free to do so but it must be in the first paragraph. I will submit an outline and and a few instructions of what the professor is looking for. I will also attach the ridiculous essay that was provided to me from another writing service.