Need help on reseach paper.

I paid someone to help me on my research paper draft; however I made a 71 on this paper. Will you please help me redo my paper. My grade depends on this. Below you will find the draft and the comments the professor made to it. Also you will find the assignment question that she is requestingfor us to go by. I needed 14 resources and I only had 13. She states that it will be check through safe assign and I need eveidence and page numbers of where I found this information. Are you willing to help?

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