Online Friendship and Real Friendship, writing assignment help

hi the instruction is to help with with the soruces in my essay

1. please make everything you changed in the red color,

2. total change should be around 300 words

3. MLA foramt, only use the two sources in additional files


1. delete the “KowErt, Rachel, Emese Domahidi, and Thorsten Quandt. “The Relationship Between Online Video Game Involvement and Gaming-Related Friendships Among Emotionally Sensitive Individuals.” Cyberpsychology, Behavior, And Social Networking 17.7(2014): 447-453. PsycINFO. Web. 29 Sept. 2016.: This source

2. add the two sources in attachment to my paper, need to have a at least one quotes or paraphrase in each paragraph.

So in each paragraph there must be quotes or paraphrase from both source

3. connect the sources with my essay

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