Edit the paper using different color and take out the sentence if it doesn’t make sense or anything. Check for incorrect grammar, error, punctuation, Colloquial and subjective.
Please different color when change or add new words or sentences. Please do not use online writing assistant to check your work for spelling, punctuation and grammar. I actually want you to read the paper and edit or revise!
I feel like my paper is so simple. I would like you to change it into more in depth and add new sentences.