Proof/revise/polish a short essay

The attachment is the short essay I’ve wrote, pleas check the grammar, polish it and add to around 250-300 words. (now it’s 196 words).



Each team member should summarize the particular insights gained about the place studied through this project and evaluate the process. Unlike the weekly reflections, this should be a polished essay. Approximately 250 words, typewritten in readable font.

•Content: ideas and arguments

•Organization: a title, punchy opening sentence and punchy closing sentence

•Well and evocatively expressed (good grammar and syntax, active tense, rich language using analogies and metaphors

•Word processed without errors in a readable font

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