In this assignment you will be rewriting and critiquing the proposal provided in attachment. There are at least six improvements to be made in the document. Your job is to identify the six improvements and then, using track changes, rewrite or fix the error. Also, using the comments tool, give a brief explanation to why it is wrong and why you fixed it the way you did. Note: If your word processing program does not have track changes, you will need to insert comments in brackets using red font at the improvement location.
The document must:
- Thoroughly Identify at least six proposal weaknesses using track changes.
- Thoroughly Include a critique paragraph of at least 150 words at the end of the document.
- Thoroughly Discuss improvements for each of the weaknesses in your critique.
- Thoroughly Ensure both the comments and critique are concise and error-free.
- Be typed, double spaced, using Times New Roman font (size 12), with one-inch margins on all sides; references must follow APA