revise the essay

I upload the essay and the essay prompt for you…

Please finish the step 1 first and then I will extend 3 more days for you to revise the essa.

Here is the Comments from my professor:

1. Seems like you have some great ideas in this paper that need a bit more structure.

2. MLA is incorrect throughout. Looks like you might have accidentally used APA

Step 1 – Answer the following questions:

1. After looking over the comments, the rubric, and your paper, why do you think it received that grade?

2. What are 3-4 unity changes you will make to improve the essay?

3. What are 3-4 MLA or Citation changes you will make to improve the essay?

4. What are 3-4 word choice & grammar changes you will make to improve the score?

5. What resources will you use to help you improve the essay? e.g tutoring, meeting with professor?

Step 2 – revise the essay

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